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Bus Trip

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I rode through town today on a bus. The storefronts were empty,staring blankly. The “Elite” car lot held only a few old cars. Some of the buildings had been painted bright pink. Those were the saddest.
Just an observation. (I consider this transgressive poetry, but there's no category for that.)
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Only a few of the old cars are elite, and all modern ones are boring and barely even cars. Everything's painted in digital. And we're all tracked. We lost our freedom already without being able to stop it.

edited to add: Sorry about the depressive state.